Societies led by males have always been prone to violence and conflicts. Thus, some believe that peace would prevail if we were governed by females leaders? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people are more aware of the well-being of
society
and most of them believes that male
leaders
are only responsible for violence and conflicts, while other suggested that ladies as a leader is the better option for governing our
society
. In
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I will argue why I totally agree with the same trend in the forthcoming paragraphs. It is considered that both males and females have equal opportunities so that they can easily join any profession as per their choice.
However
, as a leader, mostly men are contesting and ladies have only a few seats in elections. To elaborate, males are already fixed their commissions with other people and business owners, so that they can easily get their votes and after winning the election, they all do by their choice either the same decision is good or bad for youngsters.
Also
, they make policies not only for businessmen but
also
for the profit of their own team.
Therefore
, these
leaders
are only getting huge money and spreading violence in our
society
, just only for their vote bank.
On the other hand
, if the lady
leaders
will be elected by youngsters
then
they do not prefer bribes to any person, they do not have any pressure to do their work. To explicate, they are treating everyone equally and
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equal opportunity to every citizen of the nation and always try their best for the well-being of the
society
.
For instance
, the newspaper "The Tribune" revealed that in Singapore mostly females are leading their nation successfully and peacefully.
Hence
, the conflicts are less. To sum up, I would like to restate my vista as female
leaders
are doing for the well-being of
society
, whereas males prefer to buy a vote in the election just to secure their own seat.
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