Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some societies think that

government

grants must not be used for encouraging art and culture, whilst other

people

feel more emphasis on cultural exercise

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advantageous for the country's

people

as well as

culture, too. In

this

essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and give examples.

Firstly

, I will explore the

government

funding for art and culture and

secondly

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I will discuss the other view

that

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how cultural activities may be beneficial.

To begin

with, more spending on art and practice may not seem a great idea because many ethical problems

needed

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to

fix

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by the

government

.

Although

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, support rather than money would make sense and the

people

of the province

will

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be economically safe.

For example

, if the

government

spends on unethical matters it could lead to

economically

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low,

consequently

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the general public might suffer.

Further

, the public should not think of present leisure but rather always opt for the future.

In addition

, their children will be safer from the decisions they make now.

For instance

, the

government

's decisions affect the future growth of the country.

On the other hand

, funding for cultural activities may benefit the

people

as they can express themselves in front of the world and

also

attract tourism which

further

boosts the economy of the country.

Moreover

, It will generate employment opportunities for the public, which will bring a change in lifestyles.

Furthermore

, the public will understand their own cultural system and preserve it for their children and for history. In fact, human beings' evolution has a history which is preserved by our ancestors. In conclusion,

government

support in terms of financial aspects may lead to a serious future economic crisis. In my opinion, cultural exercise and arts are both benefiting the economy and will provide a new source of income from tourism.