In some countries, more peoplt the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

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It is true that many residents in several countries are becoming more and more interested in
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about the
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of the house and
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buildings
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where they living in recent years. There are a variety of possible reasons for
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and approaches
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these histories. In my opinion, three main factors are to blame for the situation these residents behave in these countries at present.
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, modern
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live in a better and better way in these countries.
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to say, they don’t nervous
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the lack of
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, water or other living facilities.
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, they will feel bored and don’t what to do,
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just meets them.
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, they are curious about these histories, because, as we all know,
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mankind is a kind of creature who has
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curiosity for anything they don’t know,
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these while they are equipped with enough situations.
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,
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all would like to know more and more
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, even these histories about the house and building they live in.
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can use several approaches to
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this
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, they can
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all old buildings and
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which are relative to the place they live in,
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can get more information.
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, they can interview some old
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who used to live in
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place, these
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may know more things about these old buildings. After getting so much information, they can
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some materials in
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and prove the information they get,
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. At
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, they can ask for some experts in these areas,
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, and get the final result for the survey plan. In conclusion,
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do have more and more interest
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the
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of their habitat and they can use a series of approaches to find out those.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • historical significance
  • property value
  • cultural heritage
  • sense of belonging
  • restoration projects
  • original integrity
  • legal concerns
  • safety concerns
  • structural problems
  • natural disasters
  • contamination
  • community engagement
  • neighborhood pride
  • preservation
  • notable figures
  • architectural styles
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