As global trade increase, many goods including those we use in daily basis are produced in another country and have to be transport long distance. Do benefit of this trend outweigh disadvantages?
In recent times, due to globalization and relaxed international
trade
rules. Countries
are supporting each other by supplying materials which they are Change preposition
in deficit
deficit
or surplusReplace the word
deficient
of
. Many people believe through Change preposition
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this
ties between nations improves
. While others believe that too much Correct subject-verb agreement
improve
of
dependency on Change preposition
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trade
can lead to problems. In the following section
I will provide examples to specify whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Firstly
, The Correct your spelling
weather
wether
conditions Correct your spelling
weather
is
not the same all over the world. Some Change the verb form
are
countries
have harsh climate
while others enjoy a good moderate climate. Fix the agreement mistake
climates
As a result
of this
some places are considered rice bowls of the world. Add a comma
,this
On the other hand
, developed countries
such
as Germany
have harsh Correct your spelling
weather
wether
conditions but they have good manufacturing power. When these two Correct your spelling
weather
countries
help out each other it will be a win-win situation. For example
, Due to harsh winters
most Add a comma
,winters
of
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apply
the
agriculture is halted in Correct article usage
apply
Germany
. Eventually, they end up buying materials from Spain and Italy. This
increases the per capita income of a country
and helps in economic growth.
Secondly
, The beauty of our planet is each Continent is unique in its own way. Some places are blessed with rich Correct your spelling
natural
natrual
resources Correct your spelling
natural
such
as petroleum and natural gas. Countries
which have scarcity
of these materials can establish a Correct article usage
a scarcity
trade
route to solve their problems. For example
, Russia provides Germany
and other European nations gas
at a very less price. According to one of the German Change preposition
with gas
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minister
minsiter
the only reason why German manufacturers were able to provide products at a competitive price was because of the subsidised price provided by Russia. Add a comma
,minsiter
However
, During the recent Russian-Ukraine war, Germany
allied with the West which in turn caused Russia to increase the fees. Europe had no option but to accept the hike because they were completely dependent on the
natural resources. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
it is clear that too much of
dependency Change preposition
apply
of
a Change preposition
on
country
is not always Correct your spelling
recommended
recomended
.
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recommended
Finally
to conclude, I believe that Add a comma
,Finally
trade
helps countries
to have good
Add an article
a good
relation
. But a the same time too much dependency on Replace the word
relationships
import
may Fix the agreement mistake
imports
also
cause the exporting country
to have a monoply
and they can easily control the Correct your spelling
monopoly
decison
making of the host Correct your spelling
decision
country
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...