As global trade increase, many goods including those we use in daily basis are produced in another country and have to be transport long distance. Do benefit of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

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In recent times, due to globalization and relaxed international
trade
rules.
Countries
are supporting each other by supplying materials which they are
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deficit
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or surplus
of
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. Many people believe through
this
ties between nations
improves
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. While others believe that too much
of
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dependency on
trade
can lead to problems. In the following
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I will provide examples to specify whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly
, The
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weather
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wether
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conditions
is
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not the same all over the world. Some
countries
have harsh
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while others enjoy a good moderate climate.
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of
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some places are considered rice bowls of the world.
On the other hand
, developed
countries
such
as
Germany
have harsh
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wether
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conditions but they have good manufacturing power. When these two
countries
help out each other it will be a win-win situation.
For example
, Due to harsh
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most
of
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the
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agriculture is halted in
Germany
. Eventually, they end up buying materials from Spain and Italy.
This
increases the per capita income of a
country
and helps in economic growth.
Secondly
, The beauty of our planet is each Continent is unique in its own way. Some places are blessed with rich
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natural
natrual
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natural
resources
such
as petroleum and natural gas.
Countries
which have
scarcity
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of these materials can establish a
trade
route to solve their problems.
For example
, Russia provides
Germany
and other European nations
gas
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at a very less price. According to one of the German
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minister
minsiter
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the only reason why German manufacturers were able to provide products at a competitive price was because of the subsidised price provided by Russia.
However
, During the recent Russian-Ukraine war,
Germany
allied with the West which in turn caused Russia to increase the fees. Europe had no option but to accept the hike because they were completely dependent on
the
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natural resources.
Hence
it is clear that too much
of
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dependency
of
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a
country
is not always
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recommended
recomended
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recommended
.
Finally
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to conclude, I believe that
trade
helps
countries
to have
good
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relation
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. But a the same time too much dependency on
import
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may
also
cause the exporting
country
to have a
monoply
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monopoly
and they can easily control the
decison
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decision
making of the host
country
.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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