In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays, new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach?
Currently, thanks to technological developments, traditional methods of teaching
such
as teachers are gradually being replaced by new technology platforms. This
essay will discuss both positives and negatives of this
new approach.
There are two main drawbacks when students
utilize technology platforms for learning including eye damage and sedentary
lifestyle. When Correct article usage
a sedentary
students
look at laptops or smartphones too much
results in nearsightedness. Change the quantifier
many
In addition
, because they do not interact directly with teachers or classmates, students
' decreased demand for communication leads to fear of interacting and sharing with students
. In Viet Nam, for example
, due to the impact of the covid 19 pandemic, all students
must learn online on the technological platform
, therefore
, the rate of students
having eye problems increased so significantly compared to previous years. Besides
, the number of students
suffering from psychological diseases has increased by about 16%.This
is an alarming issue.
On the other hand
, when students
study through new technology, it would bring flexibility and diverse courses
. for them. Students
could learn anywhere such
as their
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in their
home
, coffee shops, etc. Fix the agreement mistake
homes
Besides
, they could take advantage of their free time to study. Moreover
, on the technological platform
, for
example
Coursera, Add the comma(s)
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students
could learn a host of different knowledges
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knowledge
skills
from other famous lectures Correct word choice
and skills
on
the Change preposition
around
world’s
. To illustrate, the number of Change the noun form
worlds
world
courses
in the coursera
which is an online learning Change the capitalization
Coursera
course
platform
extremely popular in the world and it provides distance learning courses
on
different disciplines Change preposition
in
such
as IT, Marketing, Financial
. Correct word choice
and Financial
Therefore
students
could improve their academic performance.
In conclusion, in addition
to the disadvantages that the technology-based teaching platform
brings, such
as eye damage and passive
lifestyle, it is Correct article usage
a passive
also
given for
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apply
student
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students
benefits
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the benefits
about
flexibility and diverse Change preposition
of
courses
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