You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and - explain what happened. - Describe the watch, and - ask them to help you find it.

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Dear Sir, I stayed at your hotel a few days back. I am glad to receive the good service and food while my stay. I was rushed to check out the room due to some emergency. I felt that I had taken all my personal belongings.
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, I realised that I forgot my watch in the same allocated place after a day. I was allocated room number 501, which is located on the 2nd floor of the building. I would like to request you to an inspection of the room. The description of my watch is an analogue dial with a steel belt,
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, The company of the wristwatch is "Titan". I request you to send me back my personal property to my house,
in addition
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, my communication address is 1002, Shukan Apartment, Chandlodia, Baroda - 201542.
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, I will bear the expanses of the parcel. I am eager to receive positive feedback from your side. Kind Regards, Ravi Mehta
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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