Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do? — Interrupt and correct the mistake right away. — Wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leader. — Say nothing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In today's modern
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corporate companies are shifting towards a flat
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hierarchy
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means unlike
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times, employees are free to question a higher position official if they commit a mistake. Some believe that it is a healthy way to point out when their co-workers are wrong.
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helps them to correct their mistake and become better.
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think that
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kind of
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might cause friction between
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colleagues
collegues
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colleagues
. I strongly believe that
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individual
individuals
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individual
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right to point someone out if they are wrong. In
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will provide examples through which
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will explain my view clearly.
Firstly
, Now
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days Firms
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world wide
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mostly recruit candidates who are Team players. Constructive
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criticism
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is
also
one of the traits which
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important for
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employee. Unfortunately,
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kind of approach may not go well with some people.
For Instance
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I and my lab
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of opinion on the Time and Space complexity of my source code. I pointed out his assumption was wrong and I
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did prove it practically at that instance he was ok. But later
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found that the rest of the semester he was
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at what I did. I understood that he was not happy with the episode which
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happened
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happened
between us.
Secondly
,
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cultures in
this
world
have a
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approach towards life here people are mostly frank and honest in giving their opinion.
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are
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others
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who have cultural
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follow strict
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hierarchical
such
as India and China. To be
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precise
I can give an example of my own experience . When
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went to study
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in Germany I had
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incident where I was not direct to my Internship Mentor. His
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was not optimal and I already knew
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. But considering his seniority I could not finger point on him. Later, when the code went live we had a few issues. During our
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brain storming
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session when I mentioned
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already knew
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his initial reaction was not good. But later knowing my Cultural background he
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me that most
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the
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German's
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are open to
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criticism
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criticism
. I have been working as a Professional in Germany
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the past 10 years and I have never come across a problem
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being open to
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other's
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. To conclude, I feel that in
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modern
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one should be free to express their feelings. Constructive
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criticism
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criticism
must always be welcomed by people because it helps an individual to grow and become an expert in his field.
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