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Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems, people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that in order to fix
traffic
 and transport circumstances, humans should promote to live in
cities
 rather than in suburbs or in the
countryside
. In my opinion, I disagree that
people
 better life in
cities
 rather than in the
countryside
.
Although
 many
people
 are going to
cities
 from the
countryside
 by private car because of work, there are some clues to fix
such
 us improving
transportation
 facilities and group travelling.
To begin
 with, one of the big problems why
transportation
 congestion happens in
cities
 is because employees do not have alternative accommodation to travel downtown. Many of them prefer to use a private car because no options to choose from.
Thus
, improving
transportation
 facilities is important in order to reduce the number of cars enter into the centre.
For example
, they are that feel convenient and safe with public transport will choose to go to the office by train or bus.
On the other hand
, encourage workers to have group travel.
This
 solution could be applied to those who come from the same
countryside
 and work in the same office or address downtown.
For instance
,
people
 from the same direction could go in the same car together
hence
 only fewer vehicles go to
cities
.
Consequently
,
traffic
 jams decrease and
people
 could share costs together. To conclude, there are two ways to solve
traffic
 and transport problems
such
 as
transportation
 facilities renovation and group travelling. Those ways are better than
people
 must live in the
cities
. These solutions must be considered by workers if they do not want to face
traffic
 jams every day.
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