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this
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but
they still spend their time on their carnivals. Punctuation problem
, but
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essay will discuss the Linking Words
reason
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reasons
that
issues and the most Correct determiner usage
these
optimum
solutions.
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optimal
Firstly
, the main reason for Linking Words
this
issue is Linking Words
most
of them are isolated in their digital devices, which don't show the value of social carnivals like national and cultural feasts. Correct word choice
that most
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example
as a trend, most social media shows western cultural festivals and events as an example, including Punctuation problem
example,
valentine's
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Valentine's
day
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Day
day
, birthdays, and wedding anniversary celebrations. Most of them celebrate those events and are very reluctant to Check wording
apply
involve
social feasts. Verb problem
attend
Furthermore
, they have a lack of knowledge of history Linking Words
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for
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, for
example
students and parents do not pay much interest in history Punctuation problem
example,
they
mainly focus on modern technology. Punctuation problem
; they
Besides
, parents are stuck with a hectic lifestyle Linking Words
due to
the Linking Words
economical
crisis, so they do not have Correct word choice
economic
days
to spend on social festivalsCheck wording
time
,
in fact, the value will decline in society. Punctuation problem
;
Further
, most children spend the day in their exam-oriented education systemLinking Words
,
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;
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therefore
they do not have time to spend on social fiestas. Punctuation problem
therefore,
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as
a trend, all the age group shows very poor interest in national fiestas Punctuation problem
, as
and
they think it is valueless Punctuation problem
, and
which
shows they are poor in Punctuation problem
, which
patriot
and more selfish.
As the most optimum solution, the government should be vigilant to consider the importance of the national fiesta and get necessary actions against these issues, Replace the word
patriotism
such
as arranging all island competitions and exhibitions during national celebrations, for illustration, involving school students' in competitions Linking Words
such
as a poem, essays, speech, and debate competitions. Linking Words
Moreover
, assigning students and parents to enjoy a social feast with peer groups is a duty. Linking Words
In addition
to that, advertising the importance of social fiestas through social media and television will motivate and encourage individuals as a whole. When regularly publishing the importance of national days and cultural days as trends community will Linking Words
attract
to it. Wrong verb form
be attracted
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Therefore
it will build Punctuation problem
Therefore,
the patriot
and Check wording
patriotism
generous
in their morals.
Replace the word
generosity
To conclude
, it is very important to change the current trend of digital isolation and engage people in social entertainment. I strongly believe that the authority should be vigilant to Linking Words
get
necessary action to encourage Verb problem
take
the
people to Correct article usage
apply
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get involve
involve
in the national feast rather than Wrong verb form
involved
isolated
.Verb problem
remaining isolated