You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter -explain why you should like the job -give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ -say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in six months say and looking after your's six-year-old child. I am glad to know that I am going to play with a kid during my stay at your place. I have just done with my graduate degree and I am looking for a six-month short-term job. I would love

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job which can help me to save my expenses during

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summer time. As you heard, I have just done my graduation in child education and

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would help me to see and play and make your kids feel happy.

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completed a one-year caregiver training program and I am sure that

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would be the essential need to understand the kid's thoughts and feelings as well. During my stay in Australia, I would prefer to read some fun story books along with water painting works.

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, I am an expert in multiple funfilled child games as well and planning to spend at least 2 hours daily during the evening time.

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but not the least, during bedtime, I will read fiction-related stories. I look forward to hearing your response to

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letter. Hope it will come soon and please do not hesitate to ask me for more and find the cover letter for more information about my studies and other achievements. Yours Sincerely, Lakshmi.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

233 words

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