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SOME PEOPLE CLAIM THAT NOT ENOUGH OF THE WASTE FROM HOMES IS RECYCLED. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

#people #waste #homes #governments #requirement #laws
Some
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people
peple
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people
 feel that there is not enough residential waste recycled.They argue that recycling can only
increased
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 if
people
 are legally required to participate.
Only
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of
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this
 problem is that increasing recycling is the one way for governments to make it a legal requirement. It is inconvenient for many
people
 to recycle their household waste.Many
people
 do not actively engage in recycling not because it is not a mandate but because they do not have access to curbside recycling. If they want to participate, they have to travel long distances to find a recycling
center
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.
Thus
,if governments make recycling facilities more and more accessible, participation will
also
 improve greatly without any legal requirements. On the other side,it should be improved with the help of
people
 who are separating their unnecessary wates for sharing their knowledge
to
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 other
people
 in their locality or society by doing some types of campaigns or surveys.So,
that
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 all
people
also
 know about it and follow
this
.
Accordingly
,teachers should tell their students (
next
 generations) do some types of activity related to
this
 to be
awareness
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. In conclusion, I believe that there should be needed
of
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rule
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rules
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 and
regulation
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regulations
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 by
government
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the government
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.In
this
 way,
people
 can save the world which is under the layer of ozone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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