The maps above show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps above show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures illustrate the development that has taken place in the
village
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of Stokeford over the period of 80 years, from 1930 to 2010.
Overall
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, the town has been completely converted from a small rural
village
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into a largely residential area, with many
houses
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has been built around it. First of all,
it is clear that
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a lot of farmland in the north and south of the
village
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in 1930 has been demolished and turned into a series of new
houses
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with a path between them. A big garden was modernized into a retirement home. Some shops
next
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to the post office were erected and replaced by new
houses
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.
Moreover
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, the primary school was
also
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renovated into a larger building by adding two
houses
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. Even though the
village
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has undergone significant changes, the post office, Stoke river and the main road stayed unchanged.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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