You are looking for a part time job. Write a letter to a employment agency. IN your letter : -introduce your self -explain what sort of job you would like -say what experience and skill you have

#part #time #job #employment #agency #-introduce #self #-explain #sort #-say #skill

Dear Sir,

Madarm

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Madam

I am writing

this

letter to apply

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for a

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job that you are recently hiring.

Firstly

, I would like to introduce myself that I have experience

regarding to

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this

job. I am 'Phanomporn Thongon" you can call me shortly "pair"

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is my nickname. I

work

in the kitchen

almost

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4 years and I have several

way

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skill

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therefore

, I always practice myself to learn a new

thing

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. I love to

work

in the kitchen, I can

work

in a pressure situation workplace and always keep

practicing

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. I am very

surely

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that I will be a good chef. I am able to make

many

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any

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kind

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the

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apply

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food,

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as thai,

frence

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fence

France

furnace

Itarian

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Italian

food

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etc.. because I have

work

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with many

place

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that

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I could have many different

skill

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one of the suitable potential that you can consider

this

present is I confident I would be a good staff and I have some

evident

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evidence

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which is more useful to confirm my experience is I have

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outstanding staff

cetificate

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certificate

. All above as I said that you can trust me. Thank you in advance, If your best considering I am looking forward to

see

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you soon. sincerely your Pair

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

203 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are looking for a part time job. Write a letter to a employment agency. IN your letter : -introduce your self -explain what sort of job you would like -say what experience and skill you have

Another negative impact is a trend that can create a negative work environment. For example, although younger employees have an advantage over older workers in terms of adapting to new technologies, older people usually

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicine and treatment instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is positive or a negative development?

Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone.

Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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