You are looking for a part time job. Write a letter to a employment agency. IN your letter : -introduce your self -explain what sort of job you would like -say what experience and skill you have

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Dear Sir,

Madarm

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Madam

I am writing

this

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letter to apply

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for a

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job that you are recently hiring.

Firstly

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, I would like to introduce myself that I have experience

regarding to

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this

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job. I am 'Phanomporn Thongon" you can call me shortly "pair"

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that

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is my nickname. I

work

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in the kitchen

almost

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for almost

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4 years and I have several

way

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ways

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skill

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skills

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therefore

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, I always practice myself to learn a new

thing

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things

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. I love to

work

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in the kitchen, I can

work

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in a pressure situation workplace and always keep

practicing

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. I am very

surely

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that I will be a good chef. I am able to make

many

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any

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kind

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the

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apply

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food,

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as thai,

frence

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fence

France

furnace

Itarian

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Italian

food

and

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apply

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etc.. because I have

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work

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with many

place

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places

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that

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where

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I could have many different

skill

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skills

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the

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apply

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one of the suitable potential that you can consider

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present is I confident I would be a good staff and I have some

evident

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evidence

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which is more useful to confirm my experience is I have

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outstanding staff

cetificate

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certificate

. All above as I said that you can trust me. Thank you in advance, If your best considering I am looking forward to

see

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you soon. sincerely your Pair

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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