Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is considered
people
in a country who can not speak a primary
language
can cause critical
problems
like social
problems
and practical
problems
. I completely agree with that because these
people
can not make new
friends
easily, and solving
problems
becomes so hard for them.
First
, making
friends
is the most important factor in
people
's social activities. Living in a foreign country provides a situation that making
friends
become difficult.
In other words
, speaking in a foreign
language
is hard at
first
and
people
could not show their emotions or make jokes so making friendship relation become hard, and they do not have
friends
.
Consequently
, it causes social
problems
.
For example
, a person immigrates to a new country and do not familiar with that culture and is not able to express their emotions in a foreign
language
so after a while
this
person gets social
problems
and feels lonely. Another point is that
people
who speak a
second
language
can solve their
problems
hardly because of
problems
that they have in their communication with others.
Furthermore
, there are some
problems
which are solved by other
people
, and
this
lack of communication put
people
in a big challenge.
For instance
, a person who goes to the doctor if they can not say their
problems
exactly will be in a bad situation in future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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