You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate.You now realize your classmate has returned overseas and you still have the book with you. Apologize for the mistake Find out how important the book is for him/her Say what will you do

Dear Sam, I hope you and your family are good. I just heard that you went back to India. I am so sorry to say that I have
a bad news
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, which is that your computer networking notebook is left at my home. I am so sorry for
this
substantial inconvenience.
Last
week , I had your notebook in my bag to return to you back but that day you were on sick leave.
Then
, I forgot to put it back in my bag. I can understand it is probably quite annoying for you because that textbook is crucial for you. I know you have an exam for the computer networking degree. I am feeling sad as I do not
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see any obstacle in your career. I have an idea that I can send
this
notebook by parcel. Companies like DHL can deliver a parcel quickly. I would be thankful if you could text me your current address on my phone number. Please accept my apologies for whole
this
problem. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best Wishes, Mark Jones
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