WRITE A LETTER TO THE AIRPORT MANAGER ABOUT A FLIGHT THAT YOU MISSED FOR YOUR BUSINESS TRIP BECAUSE OF A PROBLEM THAT OCCURRED AT THE AIRPORT. WHAT THE PROBLEM IS? WHAT HAPPENED AS A RESULT OF THE MISSED FLIGHT? WHAT WOULD YOU LIKE HIM TO DO ABOUT?

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter regarding a missed flight

due to

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the trouble that occurred at the airport. I was

traveling

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from Toronto to Vancouver yesterday for my business meeting. It was an indispensable meeting for the new launches of my company. Unfortunately, I was unable to

reach

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there because my flight was cancelled. There was an announcement at the terminal regarding a terror attack which was the reason for the cancellation of all flights. Owing to

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, I suffered

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an enormous loss for my company as foreign clients rejected the project.

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I got frustrated and irritated, the circumstances were not under control.

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, I will try my best to convince my clients for another meeting.

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, it was not my fault so I want the full compensation for the air tickets. It would be great if you would offer me a refund or a voucher. Hoping for your consideration on

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matter. Yours faithfully, Harmeet Kaur

Submitted by harmeetkohli31 on Sun Dec 01 2024

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Coherence & Cohesion

Consider splitting your letter into distinct paragraphs for each main idea (problem, result, request).

Task Achievement

While your writing tone is generally suitable, ensure the request at the end remains polite, even when frustrated.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter has a clear structure, with a beginning, middle, and end.

Task Achievement

You clearly explained the problem that occurred at the airport and its impact.

Task Achievement

The tone is appropriately formal and addresses the airport manager respectfully.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

161 words

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WRITE A LETTER TO THE AIRPORT MANAGER ABOUT A FLIGHT THAT YOU MISSED FOR YOUR BUSINESS TRIP BECAUSE OF A PROBLEM THAT OCCURRED AT THE AIRPORT. WHAT THE PROBLEM IS? WHAT HAPPENED AS A RESULT OF THE MISSED FLIGHT? WHAT WOULD YOU LIKE HIM TO DO ABOUT?

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