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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map details the renovation plan for the upcoming year of the Southwest Airport. Looking at the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the airport is planned to have an increase in
number
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a number
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 of
gates
 and facilities to accommodate visitors, including bag drop counter, shops, ATM centre, sky train, and car hire. The location of the
departure
 and arrival section remain the same with
addition
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in
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of
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number
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a number
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 of
gates
 and some facilities in each
area
. In the
departure
area
, the check-in counter will be moved to the right, facing the bag drop counter across it.
Additionally
, the arrival
area
 is planned to have
ATM
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an ATM
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 centre and expansion in
area
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the area
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 for car hire facility on the right-side
next
 year. They will
also
 build new cafés
on
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in
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 both
departure
 and arrival
section
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sections
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 in the renovation plan. While the security, passport control, and custom
area
 remained unchanged, shops will be opened in the
area
 connecting the
departure
 and the gate section.
Lastly
, the plan includes the expansion of the
gates
area
 into two branching corridors that hold capacity for twice as many
gates
 (18
gates
 compared to the former 8) and replacing the walkway with
sky
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 train that will run along the main corridor.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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