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Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? – Disagree -

#people #children #tv #home #school
The table below presents the comparison with regard to the numbers of tourists visiting Ashdown
Museum
 during the year before and after the refurbishment. As we can see a significant increase from 74,000 people to 92,000 in the previous year
In addition
, the chart illustrates the percentage of customers who are pleased when they come to the Ashdown
Museum
. During the year before refurbishment, 15% of
visitors
 were extremely satisfied with the
museum
, after that, the number increased up to 20%.
Furthermore
, 40% of total customers felt satisfied ( 10% more than before)
In contrast
, the proportion of dissatisfied
visitors
 fell from 40% to 15%, while the proportion of extremely dissatisfied
visitors
 fell from 5% to 5%. And 5% did not respond to the survey
Finally
, the refurbishment had a great impact on the development of the Ashdown
Museum
 which increase the number of
visitors
 and
also
 heighten their experience here
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • source of distraction
  • educational content
  • entertainment shows
  • advertisements
  • inappropriate content
  • hinders learning
  • interactive learning opportunities
  • traditional classroom settings
  • one-way medium
  • individual learning needs
  • prolonged screen time
  • negative health effects
  • eye strain
  • poor posture
  • lack of physical activity
  • overall development
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
  • interactive, hands-on activities
  • passive television watching
  • participatory forms of learning
  • group projects
  • experiments
  • real-world problem solving
  • cognitive abilities
  • social skills
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