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Many people believe that education standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

#people #education #standards #times #areas #literacy #numeracy #offer
in the modern era, most
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people
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believe
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believe
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 that education standards have declined,
such
 as in the area of literacy and numeracy. It
happen
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 because in
the
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recent times
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technology
 has grown rapidly and it makes there are
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a lot
alot
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lot
 of obstacles to
concetrate
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concentrate
. In
this
essay
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 I will discuss the problems and the solutions in
way
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 to increase the standards of education. There is no doubt that
technology
 has become
growth
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,
furthermore
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 the
technology
also
 become easier to access.
For
example
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 the Internet and
the
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smartphones, where it become primarily
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. Either old people or young people can't live without the Internet and
smarphones
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smartphones
,
such
 as the employees and the
students
. In
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case
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, the system of education
force
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 the
students
 to have smartphones,
moreover
, during the covid 19, where there is no offline
class
. In some countries,
for example
 in Indonesia, before the pandemic has come nore all the
students
 have smartphones. But the condition force the parents to
bought
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 a smartphone for their
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children
children's
childrents
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children
, if not it will impact the children
where
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 can't
following
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 the online
class
. Following the
grown
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 of
the
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technology
, it makes
study
 become easier because the source of the
literatures
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literature
kinds of literature
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are
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 unlimited. At the same time, the
students
 not only use their phones to
study
 and get
in
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class
,
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 but
also
play
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 a
game
 using their phones.
Additionally
, the growth of
the
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technology
also
 makes a
game
 can be downloaded easily.
This
game
 is so refreshing, but without limits of
time
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 it can be
the
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obstacles
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 for
students
 to
study
.
This
 is the problem why in recent days, the standard of
technology
was decrease
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 gradually. In
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conclusion
conclussion
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conclusion
,
the
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technology
 helps the
students
 to
study
, even in
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a pandemic
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pandemic
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where
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 there is no
class
 in school. But following the
grown
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 of the
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technology
techonolgy
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technology
, a
game
also
 become easier to access.
This
 is the problem
,
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 because the
students
 have a lot of obstacles to
concentrate
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.
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