More and more people are using computers and other electronic devices to acess information. So, printing of books, magazines and newspapers should not be done. Do you agree or disagree with this?
In the contemporary world, advancement in technology has changed the way
people
acquire information. An Add a hyphen
ever-increasing
ever increasing
number of individuals are utilizing electronic Add a hyphen
ever-increasing
devices
such
as Tablets
, computers, Fix capitalization
tablets
laptops
. Several I opine that there is no need to print traditional ne s hard copies of books and magazines. I firmly believe that Correct word choice
and laptops
this
statement does not hold much ground. This
essay intends to discuss why it is necessary to print such
material.
First
and Foremost, There are bulk
of Correct article usage
a bulk
people
that are not computer
literate.They are not capable of handling these gizmos. To be more specific, a person needs a well
knowledge Change the adverb
good
Correct your spelling
of operating
ofoperating
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of operating
gadgetsand
avast study of technology. Correct your spelling
gadgets and
For instance
, according to google
research,in 2020, there are only 34% males and 30% females Change the capitalization
Google
computer
literates
which is very low as Fix the agreement mistake
literate
majority
of the population is Add an article
the majority
illerate
. Correct your spelling
illiterate
Moreover
, There
is a big segment of society which is extremely poor. They can't even think of purchasing these electronic Fix capitalization
there
devices
. Computer
education is beyond their reach. To exemplify, according to world
poverty clock in 2021, roughly 86-6 million of the population are living in poverty.
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the world
Furthermore
, There are bunch
of Add an article
a bunch
people
living in remote areas
which has
not any link with the rest of the world Change the verb form
have
Moreover
, There is no electricity in such
remote areas
. The utilization of electronic devices
is far away from their thinking. For instance
, people
living in Change the capitalization
Himalayan
himalayan
region and most Correct article usage
the himalayan
areas
of african
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African
country
are living in Fix the agreement mistake
countries
thelives
with no Correct your spelling
the lives
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access
acess
to electricity.so it is very hard to get in touch with other Correct your spelling
access
areas
.In addition
to this
, their government can't even provide a single computer
to their schools. As a result
, purchasing gadgets for themselves is next
to impossible for them.
Furthermore
, Newspapers, books
carry Correct word choice
and books
Aesthetic
sense with them. Correct article usage
an Aesthetic
This
gives a unique pleasure to the reader which we can't get from a
e-book, Change the article
an
e- newspapers
and online editorials and blogs... Correct your spelling
e-newspapers
For instance
, many people
in india
like to read along with a cup of tea or coffee... Change the capitalization
India
secondly
, blue
screen of these Correct article usage
the blue
devices
may adversely Correct your spelling
affect
effect
the eye vision of the readers. Nowadays, children need spectacles in their early childhood. Correct your spelling
affect
This
situation is a result of computer's
bluescreen. which in long run could ruin their eye vision which we know is irreversible. Correct article usage
the computer's
Last
but not the
least, the other major reason is distractions. To be more specific, To
access all
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to all
the
educational materials Correct article usage
apply
requires
internet access. Social media access Change the verb form
require
also
comes along with connection. There are
Change the verb form
is
stimulantous
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stimulants
notification
while reading informational stuff. These notifications may easily distract the students.
To sum up, After Fix the agreement mistake
notifications
discussion
it is quite evident that stopping publishing the books, newspapers &magass tIs not a feasible idea.was it will deprive many Add a comma
,discussion
people
from
studyingChange the preposition
of
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