You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. ,

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to inform you that I want to take an off from the computer networking

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which I have started under you. I would like to

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you that I am working full time in a Tim Horton restaurant and I am doing a computer networking

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at the weekend.

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, nowadays it is difficult for me to manage time for study since it is Christmas month. I am working seven days a week.

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, I do not get time to complete assignments which makes me sad because I want to complete

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as soon as possible to get my dream job. I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me 1 month off from the

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. I want to focus on studying and learning everything.

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, it would be a great idea if we will start it again in January. I will take holidays from my job to complete my December month assignments. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mark Jones

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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