Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Famous actors, musicians and

sport

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players are often rewarded with

substantial

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a substantial

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amount

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amounts

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of money.

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pays are hardly unaccessible for company workers, or even leaders, but is known to be the norm for pop

stars

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.

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, I strongly agree that

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entertainers

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are unfairly rewarded with extreme high

pays

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, and

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stating

out

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how

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other forms of

performers

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including classical musicians and theatrical members should

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receive

recieve

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receive

higher pay.

Stars

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on the screen are frequently paid an enormous amount

from

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their achievement.

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members had put in countless efforts to become successful,

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,

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dedication is seen

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difference

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to

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people working

at

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other professions too.

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, a worker dedicating

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time 8 hours a day throughout the week producing varieties of useful products

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the world would unlikely get even the slightest chance of earning the same amount as the

stars

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. Meanwhile, the norms of many

stars

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are to have their own private jet, indicating the extreme richness of screen

entertainers

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.

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, I would suggest people working as part of classical musicians and theatrical

performers

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to

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 be paid more highly

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. In the area of entertainment that

are

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not broadcasted by TV, the earnings are substantially lower, and only

few

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a few

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of the best

performers

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are paid reasonably.

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unreasonable payment is a threat to the

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performers

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looses

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talented members to carry on with its performance as many move into

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alternative

careers which provides

stable

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income. A prime example of

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is many Japanese

stage

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performers

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having to take

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apply

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part-time

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part time

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part-time

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jobs in order to carry on

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career as

performers

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,

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while having enough money for living. In

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I absolutely agree that many

entertainers

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are paid excessively,

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is not the same for

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entertainers

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.

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I suggest that

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performers

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should get a rise on their wadge in order for future shows to be maintained.