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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of arts by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The chart displays
comparison
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a comparison
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 of
residents
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residents'
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 habits in five cities in Australia in
term
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terms
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 of
coffee
 and tea buying and drinking.
First
, we are going to compare
aspect
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 of %
residents
bought
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who bought
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coffee
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
. In that
aspect
,
Sydney
 is the city which has
highest
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the highest
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percentage
. 60% of
Sydney
residents
 bought fresh
coffee
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
, followed by Melbourne in the
second
 place with
percentage
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a percentage
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 of 55%.
Hobart
, Adelaide, and Brisbane
has
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percentage
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a percentage
the percentage
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 of
residents
bought
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who bought
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 fresh
coffee
 in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
 as much as 50%, 45%, and 40% consecutively.
Second
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aspect
 is
residents
 bought
instants
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coffee
 in
last
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the last
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weeks
. More than 54%
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of Hobarts
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Hobarts
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Hobart
residents
 bought instant
coffee
 in
last
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weeks
,
made
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Hobart
 the highest in
this
aspect
. The rest are Brisbane, Adelaide, Melbourne, and
Sydney
. From
the
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we can get information that only
Hobart
 and Brisbane which more than 50% of
residents
 bought instant
coffee
 in
last
 4
weeks
.
Last
 is
category
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a category
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 of went to a cafe for
coffee
 or tea in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
. In
this
 category, Melbourne has
highest
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the highest
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percentage
 followed by
Hobart
 and
Sydney
. Meanwhile only
Adelaide
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which
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has
percentage
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a percentage
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 of
residents
went
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who went
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 to a cafe for
coffee
 or tea in
last
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the last
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 4
weeks
 below 50%.
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