Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

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been stated individual must be a winner or be a loser ,so,It will create

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for people that they need to gain a victory for considering

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a successful person ,

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human-living because It is a source of schism and

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that are rejecting the previous view,

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statement to find both pros and cons of competition is a potential factor as a creator or a destructive for human.

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of all, looking at

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as a great game for each person is in their hands,

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, I'm afraid I have to disagree with it because the self-esteem of humans has dropped by the constant comparison with another person,

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as in a classroom when the teacher has considered students are on the latter of scoring many negative

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as jealousy, losing the sense of cooperation and engaging in a group as a member who wants to progress a team for reaching their goals will be broken, all of above are confirmed by many research studies in the environment of academies, workplaces.

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to a scientific study that has been conducted by many nations around the world scientists have demonstrated winning in challengeable situations

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as accepting the exam or getting a position in a career has not guaranteed happiness among these people, while others have been tried to grow in their

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by the sense of cooperation and avoiding from the win or fail

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of their efforts have gained better achievements and prosperity. In the end, the ideology of win and fail as a way to progressing in the same position in society will growing jealousy, broken communication, and losing the real meaning of

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in our society, so policy maker in specifically in academic situations must provide the environments that have constructed on the cooperation

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of competition for their nations.