Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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​Some
people
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assume that it is best to admit an unpleasant situation,
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as a
job
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that makes them dissatisfied and insufficient
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finance. Other claims that it is better to attempt and improve
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situations. ​On one hand, some
people
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accept the bad situation because they want to live their lives not only insouciantly but
also
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peacefully. In their opinion, they believe that
life
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is not straightforward enough to get everything
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they wish. And
then
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, the
job
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that they got may not be flexible
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them and makes them dissatisfied.
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, they got a
job
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at least when it is difficult to find
a work
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nowadays.
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, they may face the problem that they do not have enough finance to spend on every case
such
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as accommodation, education and shopping.
Although
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they do not afford to do these cases, they can live
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a
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normal
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such
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as attending an ordinary school, living in a normal house and controlling their wishes. ​
On the other hand
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, other
people
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are avid to overcome these unpleasant conditions and have a better
life
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.
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, the more bad conditions they can overcome, the more developed their lives
.
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After that, there are
plethora
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of competitions
in
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these days so
that
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they do not want to be the ones who are
in
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the standard level of
people
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.
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, the enthusiasm of
people
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makes their lives
improved
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a lot and pushes them to have a better
life
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. If they get a better
condition
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conditions
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such
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as a higher salary
job
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and a stately house, they will be the ones who are envied by the other
people
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. ​In conclusion, from my point of view, I prefer passing the bad conditions and having a better
life
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to accepting these situations as I am a teenager who is interested in
challenging
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. ​
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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