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Tea is better than coffee, to what extent do you agree

#tea #coffee
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Nowadays, most
of
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Indian
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people
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 prefer to drink
tea
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 .
Tea
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 is good than coffee . I firmly
agree
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this
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 viewpoint, to large extent. My preference justified is
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further
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 paragraph. Focusing
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tea
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 benefits ,
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 with, it's
wrok
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work
 like tablets . Many
people
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 prefer to have
tea
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 in the morning because
it's gives
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 energy .
for example
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, Sometimes
people
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 have work
lod
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load
 in the office and they feel very
tried
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tired
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 so they drink
tea
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 .
Secondly
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,
it's have
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 lots of variety
such
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 as green
tea
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 ,black
tea
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 and many more.
People
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there
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their
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 health and body
maintain
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maintenance
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 so they drink green
tea
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