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nowadys many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. what might this be the case. what could be the disadvantages of being self-empolyed.

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Many
people
 prefer to start their own
business
instead
 of working under other companies or organisations. There are some reasons for doing own
business
 and have some pros and cons of
this
 development.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons, advantages and disadvantages in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with,
firstly
, some companies do not give salary on time to
employees
.
Then
 they suffer from financial crises.
Secondly
, higher-level officers in a
company
 do not respect the
employees
 who work under them they consider them inferior.
For instance
, I worked in a bcc
company
 for 2 years,
then
 I left my job due to disrespect in the office because my manager did not have manners on how to speak with his
employees
. So I consider self-respect is most important in the workplace.
Moreover
, there is
also
 another reason that some
people
 are creative and they want to invest in their
business
. There are some advantages
such
 as
people
 who has his own
company
 is a manager himself, he keeps a record of all finance and they can vast their
business
 wisely. Despite
this
, there are some drawbacks
such
 as financial. To establish the
business
 one needs a sufficient amount of money to install equipment, and hire
employees
.
Furthermore
, if there is a pandemic or war issue one's
business
 can be demolished.
For instance
, One of my friends started a
business
 of confectionery in 2016, it was very smooth till early 2020.
Then
 in ,2020 his
business
 goes down during COVID. There was no supply of raw material
then
 he became bankrupt and now he is working in a private firm. To conclude, in my opinion, starting own
business
 is better than working under another
company
.
People
 can earn more money than the salary paid by a firm
Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on

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