There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...........,
Dear, Manager
I am a customer of your
bus
service. I am writing this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the time that the bus
arrived in
the Change preposition
on
last
day (17th July 2022).
I usually travel with your the vehicles of your company because your services make my life more convenient, Additionally
you always pay attention to the satisfaction of the customer. And today I have to inform you that I found some problem in your service. Add a comma
,Additionally
Last
day, I was waiting for the bus
of your company at 08.00 A.M. to 10.00 A.M. but is
has no vehicle come to my place. Actually,Correct your spelling
it
the
should come to the Correct your spelling
they
bus
station every hour. So that makes me miss an interview for a new job.
Therefore
, I suggest that you should send a notification to customer real problem to passengers if you would be late and or make a timetable that has informations
about time tale and the location of the Change the wording
information
pieces of information
bus
that nearest to the bus
station.
Yours faithfully,
Pattarawadee BoonkaewSubmitted by r.pattaa on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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