Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: Explain your travel plans. Describe the interesting places you plan to visit. Ask for suggestion for sightseeing options.

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Dear Sam, I hope you and your family are great. I am really excited to share the good news that I am coming to Canada for the Christmas vacation. I would like to tell you my plan for

this

vacation.

Firstly

, I am going to New York

City

to meet my relatives. In the USA I plan to stay for five days. On 24th ,December I will come to Canada and see you in your

city

Brampton. In ,Canada I would like to live 15 days as we want to celebrate Christmas and New year there. Oh,another thing I wanted to tell you is that I have a plan to go to Niagara Falls. I want to stay there one night because I want to see the fireworks and the nightlife of the

city

which is very famous.

In addition

, I have already booked a room for the New year celebration at CN Tower in Toronto. I would greatly appreciate it if you could advise me about some tourist places in your

city

. I want to do skiing.

Furthermore

,please recommend to me some places for Indian food in Brampton

city

. Let me know if you need anything from India. I am really happy to see you after a long time. Best Wishes, Mark Jones

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8 paragraphs

214 words

9.00

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Clear and correct grammar

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