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Nowadays,many people choose to be self-employed,rather than to work for a company or organisation.why might this be the case?what could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

At the present, the type of
work
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 can be classified into 2 types,
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 as an employee with the
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 and
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 as a freelance.
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, most
people
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 will select to
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 as a freelance. They will not do a
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 with the
company
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. In my opinion, I think that freelance has disadvantages more than advantages. Freelance is classified as a high-risk
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 that will not suitable for the newly graduated student.
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, the income is not stable all the time.
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, it is very hard to find tasks in
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 kind of
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 because when you
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 as a freelance, you have to find a
job
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 by your self which is less opportunity. When compared to the
company
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, they will provide some
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 for you to do. So, you will have more time to focus on your
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.
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, most
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 will employ a
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 to do because they already have a team to build your product.
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, most freelance will receive very low income due to the high competition in
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 market, whether in
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 or quality.
People
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 try to lowering down the
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 to steal customers.
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 will affect to profit in each task.
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, Bob post the
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 for designing a bottle is around 3000 dollars.
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, Susan cut off the
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 by 1000 dollars. They will reduce their
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 until remaining only the cost.
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,
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 will not suitable for workers that want to be wealthy
people
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 in the future. To sum up,
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 freelance
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 is not a good choice for some workers. If you want to do
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job
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, you have to prepare for risk and competition.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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