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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In the modern world, because of many reasons, some
languages
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 have been not used
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 time to time. Many find that the fewer
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 all around the world the more convenient and simple life is, while I firmly expose that the
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 which include both vocal and handwriting are the backbones of the human civilization. On the one hand, it is doubtlessly to think that the same
language
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 could be beneficial to co-working and communicating in many ways because
people
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 find it easy to understand each other which is the basic criteria of collaboration. To illustrate,
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 who work in multinational companies sometimes struggle to communicate with other foreign colleagues. Some working
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 research pointed out
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 the main reason which personnel could not express their ideas in the meeting.
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, I believe that thanks to the technology innovation growth, there are many applications that help
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 measure the above problem in the office.
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, some studies demonstrated that the distinction between humans and animals is
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 inheritance is known as civilization. In order to have local handwriting, human ancestors addressed many under standard conditions
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 as being lack of pens and papers to innovate word identification. Because of that, the
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 stands for the culture and history of the area
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 as the idiom “beyond the pale” original from the UK area which symbolized the glorious historical period and is still used in some novels and documents. If
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 delete one
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, it means that one magnificent historical background will be removed from the world and the living diversity decreased. In conclusion, I am significantly convinced that
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 play an important role in humanity.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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