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The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

#marriage #people #trend #effects #society #right #type
Nowadays, some individuals consider that homosexual
marriage
 could have a negative impact
among
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society
 while others see it
like
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 a normal trend. My own belief is that everyone should have a personal choice
especially
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 when talking about love and
marriage
, and gay
marriage
 should be legalized. In the following
paragraphs
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 I will explain my point of view and I will give examples.
Firstly
, current
society
 is based upon different rules. The most important rule in democratic countries is
the
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humans
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 rights which
also
 implies gay
people
.
Furthermore
, homosexual
people
 need to have
same
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the same
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access
acces
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access
 to education, jobs, health and
marriage
.
For instance
, there are countries, like
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 who accepted homosexual
mariagge
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marriage
 and even their right to adopt and raise children.
Thus
, accepting
this
 trend has not led to
negative
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a negative
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 impact on
society
for
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 the past years, and
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 remained a high developt country in Europe.
Moreover
, accepting gay
marriage
 is a form of accepting LGBTQ
people
 in current
society
 and not seeing them like outcasts. While it may be correct that in the
last
decades
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 media had an important role in presenting their life and struggles and keeping a negative balance
gay
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people
especially
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 regarding health issues in the 70s, it still appears to be the case,
however
, that homosexual
marriage
 could not affect in any way our
society
. Their love, rights and private life
is
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 not on current
society
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 concern. To sum up, my own belief is that in a democratic country, human rights prevail and gay
marriage
 should be legal because it does not have short or
long term
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 negative effects
upon
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 current
society
.
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