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The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs enormous government expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the recruitment of expenses that are
controversial
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a controversial
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 issue for
policy makers
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policymakers
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 who pay attention to
invest
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on
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 creating new
infrastractures
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infrastructures
infrastructure
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as more
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more
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better way for developing than renewing
aging
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places
,
however
,it is well known both are needed for a suitable hometown for citizens, because
old
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the old
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 design has made a historical environment in the cities ,
instead
 of,modern structures are known more comfortable and
conveniece
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convenience
convenient
 for the
socity
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society
, so,I am going to explore both for clarifying which one is
more
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better for investing wealth and time for the town. At
first
,modern architecture has been extended with more concentration on the
places
where
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 are more adapted
with
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 the planet ,so, many nations
has
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 been tried the most majority of wealth would
specified
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 in providing new
places
instead
 of protecting old
places
,
however
 ,in the
first
 glimpse , it is very interesting but we must
causious
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cautious
caution
 that each city needs to
historical
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 background to keep the form and structure of culture for own people,
as a result
, it is more suitable
that
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 the most part of
budgent
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budget
spend
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 in
bulding
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building
 new
places
.
In
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 the other hand, fixing historical homes and roads which have in danger
with
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 destructing is so waste of money and time ,
for example
, the amount of building
new
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a new
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 home is less than fixing it as a safe place ,but,many old houses have
ability
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 to stay more if these are fixed by the proper way. To sum up, governments must prefer to
inact
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enact
 in providing money for creating new houses and streets .
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