Some believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?
With the development of social equality,
gender
equality has become a heated topic. While some think that women
have the right to do any job
they want, others believe that women
cannot do some special jobs
. Personally, I do agree
the view that there should not have any limitations on Add the preposition
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women
's choices, they can do any job
they want.
In terms of individuals, the stereotype
that women
are not suitable to do certain jobs
has adverse effects not only for women
but for men. On the one hand, this
thought that women
only suit some low-paying jobs
such
as nurses, secretaries, teachers and healthy workers forms a stereotype
, which is not beneficial to bridging the gender
pay gap. If the gender
pay gap is widened, women
are reluctant to go to work, which means they are more likely to experience domestic violence because they depend on their husbands. On the other hand
, this
stereotype
will develop discrimination. One man, for instance
, who are interested in teaching children but because of this
gender
stereotype
will do a job
he dislikes, which will lower his well-being.
Obviously, such
detrimental effects also
have a knock-on impact throughout society. Taking executive jobs
as an example, there is a stereotype
that women
are not suitable for political jobs
. If a country's political officials are all men, the country's laws made by men will favour males, which undermines women
's rights. For
a stable perspective, Change preposition
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this
job
discrimination will lead to more gender
conflicts that will damage a country's cohesion.
In conclusion, while it is true that there is still a stereotype
that women
are not good at particularly jobs
, it is problematic that some still keep this
discrimination. This
view inevitably has negative impacts on individuals' physical and mental health, as well as the cohesion of communities.Submitted by 1980987589 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite