With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people think that it is a good speed forward, while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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because I am motivated by the smell of the paper for having a long study time ,
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eyes because the blue light of electronic devices
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electronic devices to build their own libraries,because
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scientist
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital revolution
  • sustainability
  • e-reader
  • digital rights management (DRM)
  • nostalgia
  • tangible
  • bibliophile
  • innovation
  • disruptive technology
  • screen fatigue
  • monetization
  • brick-and-mortar
  • obsolescence
  • cloud storage
  • multimedia features
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