You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company to which supplied the equipment. In your letter -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work -say what to want the shop or the company to do
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the product of your company which I purchased from the online shop. I have recently ordered the Dell notebook 123 from eBay. Unfortunately, when I was taking off the packaging, it has some fractures on the monitor that makes me unable to work.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite