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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

#job #course #teachers #situation #time #action
Dear Sir or
madam
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, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I am not available to attend the
recently
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 study course. I have got an opportunity from the best
one
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apply
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hotel which
offer
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 me to work
as
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a
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full-time. Unfortunately, I will drop my current education. In facing, I am feeling so
delightful
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 that I got a good chance which I have never tough that I can receive it. but, It absolutely could not be happy.
Moreover
, when I know that I must
to
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stop the time to study, I feel down. Anyways, I have been consulted with the manager of students, he suggests me to retime
table
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on
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for
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next
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the next
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 2 months because that moment has some available
class
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classes
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on
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at
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the
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apply
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night time which I could organize myself to be presented in the
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classroom
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class room
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classroom
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.
In addition
, I am so happy to study with you, it was
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 wonderful time to be your student Thank you Sincerely your Pair
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