several languages are in danger of extinct because they are spoken by very small number of people. some people say tgat governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe taht would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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languages
are disappearing because people prefer to communicate in
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international
languages
. One camp claims that the government ought to spend money and save the future of endangered
languages
. At the same
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critics said it is nothing less than the wastage of public money. In
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I will discuss both views and give my opinion at the end. One section of the society holds
this
perception that the government be supposed to shell out bucks and save local
languages
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because every
language
has its own importance and it
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global diversity. If mother tongues get obsolete
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it would cast adverse effects on the culture and uniqueness of the particular group. So
that is
why the government has to open up local
language
schools and inclined the people
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mother tongue. On the flip side,
this
ideology is at loggerheads with
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another group
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, that all efforts to protect the dead
languages
are futile. If we have some popular and international
languages
to communicate
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money and energy must spend to promote
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languages
rather than saving local
languages
.
Moreover
, communication is the prime purpose of
language
and it would be immensely handy if all mankind prefer one
language
. In
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language
would not be a barrier. In my opinion in
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era of globalisation
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go
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global rather than local. Dead
languages
like Latin Sanskrit have little importance,
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we have
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technology to convert and understand the dead
language
literature. To conclude. Change is a constant, so with time local
languages
are going to vanish and global
languages
are getting
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