Write a letter to an accommodation agency for change in your accommodations (150 words) - explain your past requirements - why do you want to change your current accommodations - what are your requirements for the new accommodations

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Dear sir, I am joseph, writing

this

letter to request you to change my current

accommodation

at Horizon Tower Flat No.5609, because I am suffering here by countless issues related to hygiene

also

I am varied about my studies. Earlier, I made it clear to you about things I could not manage within the

accommodation

Firstly

, neatness is my top priority, late night comers will disturb our sleep and enjoying high-sound music can divert the attention of others. Unfortunately, at present ,accommodations people did not maintain discipline as well as hygiene. So I cannot tolerate

such

activities. So kindly take the necessary steps to change my

accommodation

as soon as possible, because the

semester is near. I have to do the preparation. It is my humble request to you to provide

accommodation

where others students are hygienic, maintain timings and show manners while dealing with roommates. I hope you understand my situation and that I cannot concentrate on my studies because of the problems I am facing on a daily basis. Changing

accommodation

can be the only remedy to all the problems. I am looking for your quick action on these. Yours faithfully, Joseph

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