When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Education plays a significant role in everyone's life and
school
are
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the door
of
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education. I agree with the statement that whenever any student
go
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to a new
school
, it is very common to have some issues, as a
,
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result
school
plays an important part in solving
this
problem no matter which student is having them. In my opinion, there are two possibilities
school
can help their
students
to solve any problem, which I will explore in
this
essay.
First
, as an initial point; I would like to say that,
students
who are new in
school
they
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sometimes have hesitation to ask or to talk with anyone about their concerning matters. For
this
, I think that there should be a complaint box in every
class
.
Students
can write their issue on a paper and
then
can place that paper in that box, which later on could be seen by the
class
teacher.
Hence
,
teacher
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the teacher
a teacher
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can talk to the student directly and aid him in solving the matter.
For example
, I remember, we used to have
such
types of boxes in my
school
and on the
first
day of my
school
, I felt very alone as I was not having any friends in the
class
. The
next
day I write
this
on a paper, which was
later on
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was seen by my teacher and she introduced me to the
class
and helps me in making friends.
Subsequently
, due to the new environment of the
school
, some
students
don't adapt easily, they still miss their old
school
and want to go there only.
In
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such
type of ,situation
school
can add more fun activities for the
students
, which help them in adapting slowly.
Moreover
, they can
also
teach their
students
while playing,
such
as come puzzle games activities, which make them
to
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learn things
easiy
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easily
easy
during playing. In conclusion, I believe that education plays a very significant role in everyone's life and so the
school
. It is obvious to have few problems when going to a new
school
,
therefore
I think that, with the help of a complaint box and by increasing fun activities for
students
, any issue could be solved .
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