A balanced diet, or eating balanced meals, is the key to a healthy life. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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us to keep and good soul. In every ,masses soul food plays a significant role.For keeping good well-being, food is not only the source others sources must be important.I agree with
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statement to some large extent and I will discuss the reasons in upcoming paragraphs. For leaving good growth fitness is must significant.
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or meal take
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effect on well-being. It
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the level of disease.
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mean to say that if
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and good meal is followed we
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out of short in whole life.
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care about our
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our health is worsening day by day.
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provides more energy which helps to do the work. ,
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it helps restore our body a fresh in a better and purpose fully manner.
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is not the key to
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life.some other sources which help to make healthy
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.it must be important which is exercise.To explain it, if we take only a healthy
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and no use of any other activities so we can't make a healthy and strong body
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can't live a successful life without any
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,if we can do any work only eating
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diet
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so we can' ameliorate health.
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, To sum up,food and water is the source that helps to keep stay on earth so
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must be important. According
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I favour the former statement
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Balanced diet
  • Essential nutrients
  • Vitamins and minerals
  • Proteins and fats
  • Chronic diseases
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Obesity
  • Mental health
  • Cognitive function
  • Omega-3 fatty acids
  • Healthy weight
  • Calorie intake
  • Overeating
  • Energy levels
  • Physical performance
  • Stronger immune system
  • Illnesses and infections
  • Variety of foods
  • Long-term health
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