Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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From the past to today, especially the

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three decades have witnessed negative cases,

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as the over pollution in lakes or terrestrials. One of the most remarkable reasons is human-induced waste and the highest share of these pollutants belongs to materials based on plastic.

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to the plastic residues, another polluting factor is chemical products

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as detergents. To

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the ecological balance of these highly-harmful determinants is a consequence of increasing the general consumption trends in many areas

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as textile, transportation vehicles which need fossil fuels and others. According to the scientifical study which it is conducted by Toronto University, greenhouse gases and wastes which they are released in the processing of production have reached double-folds in comparison to 30 years before.

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, another significant cause is the population which continues to rise almost every year around the world. In spite of all these facts mentioned above, many actions, that they will be taken by governments exist as well. One of these implementations is to be organized various campaigns in order to build public awareness. In

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way, ecological lesson contents can be scheduled.

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, it can be provided with a strict policy approach which is well-structured and

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regulations. To sum up, it is an undeniable fact

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environmental erosion exists. With

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supportive regulations in the field of policy and

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practices, it can be avoided from

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rapid pollution.

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, in long run, a serious environmental disaster will hit the world by leaving permanent damages behind.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumerism
disposable culture
over-packaging
non-recyclable
public awareness
waste management
environmental impact
recycle
recycling facilities
waste separation
single-use products
infrastructure

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