Some people believe that advertising is useful and informative while others believe it provides false information in order to increase the price of products and services. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (29th Aug) (GT)

These days, it is apparent that commercial advertisement is able to increase the sale of promoted products and services.

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seems to benefit the companies, some people argue that spending a substantial budget on advertising is not worth implementing. In

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essay, both points of view will be elaborated before my perspective to support the former views is reached. On the one hand, advertisements dramatically proliferate the

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of

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. In order to promote the products, the companies need to spend an enormous amount of budget on hiring influencers and film

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, purchasing broadcasting time on various media

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as TV, social media, radio, and so on.

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, the luxury women's bags branded Celine purchased 10 million US dollars to hire Lisa, a member of a Korean girl group named Blackpink, to be a

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ambassador.

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,

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the augmentation in the

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of

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, the price of selling in markets

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rises

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result, it will be more difficult for many customers to afford the goods or services.

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, advertisement significantly raises the awareness of people toward the

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. When people realize the value of the

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, they are satisfied to buy

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the products

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.

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,

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Celine spent 10 million US dollars

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Lisa, the handbag that Lisa posted the picture with on her Instagram, was sold out within an hour after her posting, which

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a lot of profit and

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100 million US dollars to the company.

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, it is a promising method to communicate with the customers to let them know more about the

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and

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the

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of the goods. Without advertisement, no one will notice that the

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is existing. In summary, In spite of the drastic increase in the price of the goods and the

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of

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owing to advertising, I believe that it is worth it for the company to invest money in

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aspect as it can raise

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attention, and increase sales.