write a application for your child's admission to school

To, The Principal, Bahria School & College NORE-1, M.T Khan Road, Karachi. Sub: Request Letter for Admission Dear Sir/ Madam, I, Anoop Kumar, am writing
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to request your admission of my beloved son to the institute. Fortunately, your quality education is
also
affordable and near my home premises. I am an IT manager in a USA-based mining company working remotely from Karachi and my wife is an emerging cardiologist. My son, Vinayak, is a very talented boy studying in class three in another faculty. He has got his sharp mind from me and my wife and so he is quite intelligent and a quick learner.
Due to
our busy schedule, we realized a little late that a subsidy from an elite school
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not what we expected. We felt it was wasting his thinking ability. Our son deserves a much better place to groom his personality and career and what could be better than an institution of yours
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The Bahria School & College is a symbol of the educational aspirations of the Pakistan Navy and
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reason is quite enough for us that our son’s mental and physical development will be in trusted hands and somehow, he will step up as a reflection of Pakistan’s forces. Kindly consider my little boy for entrance at your facility, I assure you that he will not only qualify but will prove a better asset to your academy. I request you to give him a chance to gain the quality education provided by you so he can have a better tomorrow. Regards, Anoop Kumar 03002390797
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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