You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely disssatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:  Explain the reason for the celebration  Give details of your visit to the restaurant  Say what you would like the restaurant to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,
This
letter is being written to express my dissatisfaction with the meal that I and my friend had at your restaurant
last
Thursday. I am hoping that you take the necessary action to improve your food quality and service In order to maintain your reputation. Is along with my friend went to your restaurant around Fooddock to celebrate the completion of our postgraduate degree with
first
grade; Supposing it to be a memorable time 1/200 had a frustrating experience because of many reasons.
First
of all, we adored two servings of vegetarian fried rice, but we were shocked to observe that the rice was undercooked and had a pungent odour.
Also
, when we complained about for same to the waitress she didn't pay much attention to
this
. You can understand my, frustration when I and my friend had to leave the Crestowant empty stomach and with utter disappointment. My intention in writing
this
letter is to ask you to issue a Show Cause Notice to the supervisor at your restaurant and disseminate instructions to all your staff to maintain decorum. Please provide the best possible meals, dining experience and efficient waiters to your customers. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Anjali.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • therefore
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  • despite

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