Graduates who cannot find work in their chosen field should be advice to do a second degree, rather than taking a job that does not interest them. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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society’s demands. Most of the graduates in these fields

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often end up working in

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less desirable jobs rather than pursuing their education in a different route.

Although

I do see the logic behind their decision, I believe that applying for another academic major will lead to a successful career. Some people are of the opinion that trying to graduate in a

second

field

is a waste of time. Minutes spent in gaining academic

knowledge

for a

second

subject

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could be used to build experience in

working

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environment. In corporal systems, more years of experience in a company is something that can distinguish your resume from others and it has a higher value

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to the

numbers

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of academic degrees. Many

job

seekers are often rejected by companies owing

specially

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to

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lack of working experience. All in all,

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a particular

job

would be more beneficial

instead

of learning theoretical

knowledge

. I firmly believe that having

further

education is a more adequate option in today’s societal situation.

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taking a different course of study past educated

knowledge

may seem futile, those who are

expert

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in multiple academic subjects are proven to be the most successful and innovative individuals in their careers. A chief with an academic degree in both cooking and chemistry can combine a perfect mixture of ingredients with his chemical information to keep the appropriate level of acidity,

and

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thus

making a perfect dish for customers. Employers often prefer

job

seekers with

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similar capabilities.

Additionally

, for those who opt for starting a

job

in a

field

with

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level of enthusiasm and motivation, the prospect of success is unimaginable. Being forced to work in a

job

in which satisfaction does not play a role often

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in either early resignation or eventually being

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redundent

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by the corporation. Multiple survey figures conducted by a number of human resources departments illustrate that

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satisfaction

satisfation

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satisfaction

is the main factor in one’s decision to follow a career,

in addition

to

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likelihood of promotion. It is exactly the reason why psychologists advise people never to choose a profession without interest. To summarize, many alumni may decide to work in an unrelated

field

once they could not find a related profession.

However

, it is best to extend

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accademic

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academic

knowledge

in a chosen

field

so that they could find what they desire.