It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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young age, recognizing the right and wrong policies is of great importance for

children

along with

punishment

which is essential to assist them to have

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understanding of

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difference. I completely advocate

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assertion based on some convincing reasons. The

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underlying justification is that

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reduces

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the percentage of mistakes.

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, the

children

would comprehend and diagnose their problems by putting

punishment

on the wrong which

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arise by themselves,and they take efforts to keep track of doing it in

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way.

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paves the way to gain

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knowledge of

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the distinction

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between falses and truths. Take a child who is playing games more than average magnitude as an example; here one's parents play an active role and they place some

punishments

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explain

about

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the drawbacks of gaming to the child.Thereby, the child is convinced

toward

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wrongs

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brought

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about by overplaying. In my view, the

punishments

should not be physical.

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punishment

would no longer be beneficial.

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children

suffer from

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kind of learning

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their self conscientious

decrease

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and lose their sense of satisfaction.

Therefore

, parents and teachers should be excluded from

this

kind of

punishments

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and try to learn them by informative methods

such

as explaining the sides,

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some games to show them the rights and wrongs, assign puzzles to solve them. To sum up,

although

the

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putting

punishments

are essential for

children

's better learning in recognizing errors and truths, we should ensure that

punishment

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use

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in

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correct

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way

as well as practical and not

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be physical so as to show its impact effectively.

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cause a sense of contentment in

children

.