In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

Over the past few decades, relationships between
neighbours
have completely changed. I believe, there
are
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cultural and financial
difference
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which cause
this
problem.
However
, there are appropriate recommendations to change
this
trend.
To begin
with, in comparing today with the past about
neighbours
relations, it can be concluded there
are
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not friendly contact between them.
Firstly
, these days
people
may have different
culture
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cultures
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,
idea
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ideas
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and living ways.
Therefore
,
in
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a floor which may have four apartments, there are different points of view and ideas which do not have any point in common.
For example
, a family is so friendly and they have invited their friends and family to gather together or
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parties.
On the other hand
,
the
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another
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family who live
their
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next
door, do not interested in holding parties.
As a result
, it seems to
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an
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important trouble for them.
The another
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important point is
financial
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difference which
make
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a specific space for
people
to prevent expand their
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communication
with their
neighbours
. There
are
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number
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of
recommendation
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recommendations
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to solve the issue. In the
first
step, holding meetings with
certain
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purpose can be useful. In these meetings,
people
can visit each other and discuss
about
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a common problem.
For instance
, to look for an adequate solution for parking space,
people
can be invited and meet
togheter
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together
and share their opinion to reach a well-planned idea. Another way which can be done is inviting a tower member,
for example
, to watch some football matches together or participating in some domestic
competiton
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competition
competitions
in order to find some points in common.
Thus
, in these ways,
people
can develop their friendship and solve
this
common problem. In conclusion,
although
in comparison with
past
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,
people
are willing to keep themselves in a
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safe zone
from the
people
who live
their
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next
door, some actions can be done to expand their
horizon
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about their
neighbours
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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