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In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

#people #close #relationship #neighbours #contact
Over the past few decades, relationships between
neighbours
 have completely changed. I believe, there
are
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 cultural and financial
difference
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differences
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 which cause
this
 problem.
However
, there are appropriate recommendations to change
this
 trend.
To begin
 with, in comparing today with the past about
neighbours
 relations, it can be concluded there
are
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 not friendly contact between them.
Firstly
, these days
people
 may have different
culture
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cultures
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,
idea
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ideas
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 and living ways.
Therefore
,
in
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 a floor which may have four apartments, there are different points of view and ideas which do not have any point in common.
For example
, a family is so friendly and they have invited their friends and family to gather together or
holding
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 parties.
On the other hand
,
the
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another
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 family who live
their
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next
 door, do not interested in holding parties.
As a result
, it seems to
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an
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important trouble for them.
The another
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 important point is
financial
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a financial
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 difference which
make
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 a specific space for
people
 to prevent expand their
commucication
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communication
 with their
neighbours
. There
are
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number
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a number
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 of
recommendation
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recommendations
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 to solve the issue. In the
first
 step, holding meetings with
certain
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 purpose can be useful. In these meetings,
people
 can visit each other and discuss
about
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a common problem.
For instance
, to look for an adequate solution for parking space,
people
 can be invited and meet
togheter
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together
 and share their opinion to reach a well-planned idea. Another way which can be done is inviting a tower member,
for example
, to watch some football matches together or participating in some domestic
competiton
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competition
competitions
 in order to find some points in common.
Thus
, in these ways,
people
 can develop their friendship and solve
this
 common problem. In conclusion,
although
 in comparison with
past
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,
people
 are willing to keep themselves in a
safezone
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safe zone
 from the
people
 who live
their
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next
 door, some actions can be done to expand their
horizon
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horizons
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 about their
neighbours
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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