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In some societies, obesity is regarded as a major problem. Some people believe that junk food advertising is largely to blame for this problem and should be banned. However, others feel that junk food advertising does not contribute to the problem of obesity and should not be banned. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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 debate about whether betty fat in a human body is caused by
junk
food
and
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or not
,
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 has been going around among many societies for a while now.
Junk
food
 is advertised by the seller so that they can sell and make
profit
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 but some part
the
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population
 don't support
this
 advertisement and are against it, demanding a shut down of
this
junk
food
industries
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Where
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other
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 part of the
population
 believes that
junk
food
 and its advertisement has nothing to do with belly fat. I think both the arguments has
its
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 own point of
views
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view
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Firstly
, if I discuss with the societies
who
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 are not in support of the
junk
food
 industries.
Then
 it can be outlined that they are indicating
junk
food
 as an unhealthy diet which causes problems in
a
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 human body and makes people fat in
a
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unfavorable
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 way. In
USA
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the USA
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, almost half of the
population
suffer
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 due to excessive consumption of
junk
food
\fast
food
.
For example
 the corporate areas in
USA
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 where the major part of the
population
 are always in a rush to work so they get very little or no time to cook or have a healthy meal. So their fastest way for
a
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food
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food
 is fast
food
, which is easy and convenient but they are
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unaware
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unware
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unaware
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 of
unhealthy
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the unhealthy
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 diet
their
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 are putting on. Later slowly they get sick and due to
over weight
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overweight
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 their lifespan reduces.
Although
, some people state that
junk
food
its
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is
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 really unhealthy for them,
but
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they still tend to consume luring by
the
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attractive advertisement but
advertising
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of
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junk
food
 has nothing to do with obesity. People who are concerned about their health and are knowledgeable about the components in
food
 are more likely to avoid weight-related issues altogether. It implies that regardless of how often individuals saw advertisements for
junk
food
,
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 if they truly care about their physical and mental wellbeing, they won't regularly consume it. Adults prefer dining at home over eating out since eating
junk
food
, which is full of health dangers, is not essential. In conclusion, I would underline that
its
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 actually up to us how we allow things in our life. So balancing everything is very important. Advertisements are there to attract us but if we know how to control our greed and maintain a
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healthy
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heathy
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healthy
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 diet
then
 there won't be any health
realated
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related
issue
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