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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, advertising has become a popular and the most common way of promoting something. A vast number of companies utilise these advertising methods to convey the benefits of using their products attractively and freshly. As a commoner, I agree there are pros and cons, but in my opinion, I think it has
a positive aspects
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positive aspects
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 in development.
Firstly
, with the development of technology people are using social media and watching television hugely when compared to the past decades. Through those mediums, they got to know about a product,
benefits
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the benefits
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 of using it, and
also
 the price. Through these advertisements, products become famous not only in the local market but
also
 in the foreign markets too. As an example, we can get the product ''coca cola''.
Moreover
, everyone in the world knows
this
 from children to adults, because of the publication strength.
Furthermore
, most
of
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the
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businesses join famous celebrities to upgrade their output in a creative and attractive way because, their fans love to watch performances of them, anyhow on television.
For instance
, a lot of football players and actors had joined world-famous soft drink companies and
also
 with cosmetic groups.
Additionally
, products are emphasising not only through television and radio but
also
 via social media like Facebook, watsap and youtube. Nowadays
this
 method is cheaper compared to other types and
also
 very usual. Undoubtedly, each and everyone had experienced those promotions while watching youtube videos and wandering through Facebook.
Anyhow
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 business groups find new ways to create a positive impact on a person's mind about their selling item. Through these ways they can develop their business and overall, I think it is positively effected and has many advantages too.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • novelty
  • excitement
  • latest trends
  • improvements
  • advancements
  • differentiating
  • competitors
  • innovation
  • progress
  • attracting attention
  • generating curiosity
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